Wamphyri Redux

I recently opened a gallery on Epilogue.net and found that many of my favorite creations did not meet their demanding criteria for posting. Not to be discouraged by a mere rejection notice, I am reworking the images which were found to be lacking something. This is the first one to be ready for resubmission. The original is here: [link]
Hope they find this one acceptable...
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Comment update:
This version was accepted!

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"The greater danger for most of us lies not in setting our aim too high and falling short; but in setting our aim too low, and achieving our mark."
-(Michelangelo)